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Thursday 30 July 2015

Revising Writing

Today I have been learning about DRAFT. DRAFT is like an acrostic poem each letter of this word means something.The D stands for Delete. Delete means taking away words and phrases.

Miss Paton’s copy

Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.


My copy
Miss Paton has a cat named Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain.  He likes  sniffing my rubbish bin. He always come to my house for food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He hates my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would always want my attention.

Wednesday 29 July 2015