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Tuesday, 18 August 2015

Retelling scaffold turquoise group.

this is my book it is called  Lsobels garden and we had to retelling the story in our own words.

Thursday, 13 August 2015

what's in my lunch box

Today we are learning to look at who had the most was chip's and the 2nd most was fruit.

Thursday, 30 July 2015

Revising Writing

Today I have been learning about DRAFT. DRAFT is like an acrostic poem each letter of this word means something.The D stands for Delete. Delete means taking away words and phrases.

Miss Paton’s copy

Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.


My copy
Miss Paton has a cat named Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain.  He likes  sniffing my rubbish bin. He always come to my house for food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He hates my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would always want my attention.

Wednesday, 29 July 2015